Update Workflows/Windows/Windows Server/Roles/Active Directory Certificate Services.md

Workflows/Windows/Windows Server/Roles/Active Directory Certificate Services.md

@@ -16,6 +16,7 @@ This document outlines the Microsoft-recommended best practices for deploying a
     - Ensure the hostname is correctly configured
 
 ### Offline (Non-Domain-Joined) Root CA `LAB-CA-01` Role Deployment
+This is the initial deployment of the root certificate authority, the settings here should be double and triple checked before proceeding through each step.
 - Provision a **non-domain-joined** Windows Server
     - This is critical that this device is not domain-joined for security purposes
 - Navigate to "**Server Manager > Manage > Add Roles and Features**"
@@ -34,6 +35,7 @@ This document outlines the Microsoft-recommended best practices for deploying a
     - Restart the Server
 
 ### Offline (Non-Domain-Joined) Root CA `LAB-CA-01` Role Configuration
+We have a few things we need to configure within the CA to make it ready to handle certificate requests.
 - Navigate to "**Server Manager > (Alert Flag) > Post-deployment Configuration: Active Directory Certificate Services**"
     - You will be prompted for an admin user, in this example, you will use the pre-populated `LAB-CA-01\Administrator`
     - Check the boxes for `Certification Authority` and `Certification Authority Web Enrollment` then click "**Next**"
@@ -69,6 +71,7 @@ You will see a finalization screen confirming everything we have configured, it
     If everything went well, you will see that the "**Certificate Authority**" and "**Certification Authority Web Enrollment**" both have a status of "**Configuration succeeded**".  At this point, you can click the "**Close**" button to conclude the Root CA configuration.
 
 ### Online (Domain-Joined) Subordinate/Intermediary CA `LAB-CA-02` Role Deployment
+Now that we have set up the root certificate authority, we can focus on setting up the subordinate CA.
 - Navigate to "**Server Manager > (Alert Flag) > Post-deployment Configuration: Active Directory Certificate Services**"
     - Under credentials, let it automatically populate a domain admin. (e.g. `BUNNY-LAB\nicole.rappe`)
     - Click "**Next**"
@@ -111,6 +114,10 @@ You will see a finalization screen confirming everything we have configured, it
     You will see a screen telling you that the **Certification Authority Web Enrollment** was successful but it will give a warning about the **Certification Authority**.  The Active Directory Certificate Services installation is incomplete.  To complete the installation, use the request file <file-name> to obtain a certificate from the parent CA [*The RootCA*].  Then, use the Certification Authority snap-in to install the certificate.  To complete this procedure, right-click the node with the name of the CA, and then click "Install CA Certificate".
 
 ### Online (Domain-Joined) Subordinate/Intermediary CA `LAB-CA-02` Configuration Deployment
+At this point, we will need to focus on getting the certificate signing request transferred to `LAB-CA-01` (the rootCA), this can be via temporary network access (sharing a CSR via a SMB network share from `LAB-CA-02`) (not recommended) or via a USB flashdrive (more secure).
+- Once the certificate signing request file `C:\LAB-CA-02.bunny-lab.io_bunny-lab-LAB-CA-02-CA.req` is on `LAB-CA-01` (RootCA) we can proceed to get it signed.
+- **PLACEHOLDER**
+
 !!! warning "Under Construction"
     Section is still being written during lab deployment.